Friday, May 2, 2014

JFK outline / Essays

Today we discussed the JFK prompt :

Here is the JFK prompt on page 1
sample essays follow (each new essay starts with a large capital letter)
scores for the essays can be found on pg. 10

Here are 3 sample papers from the College Board (a 9, 5, 3)

Your Homework: Outline how you would approach the JFK essay 

Thesis: (JFK's purpose and how / why) _____________________________(see handout for analysis)

1. 1st move by JFK: he gives the audience a sense of _________
(patriotism? injustice? understanding that a wrongdoing has been committed? establishes common ground?)


  • How does he do this (choose 2 examples from the section) - the smaller the better 
  • ex: creates sense of injustice - portrays sacrifices "Reservists..leave homes", "serviceman killed," to convey the magnitude of the irresponsible behavior of the steel companies 


2. 2nd move by JFK: to create a sense of _____________

  • uses ________(device)  ex: "_________"(text)  in order to ____________
  • uses ________(device)  ex: "_________"(text)  in order to ____________


3. 3rd move by JFK: to create a sense of _____________


  • uses ________(device)  ex: "_________"(text)  in order to ____________
  • uses ________(device)  ex: "_________"(text)  in order to ____________

Extra Credit: Write full essay instead of outline 

If you were absent yesterday - you need to take the multiple choice test and see me for grading