Post Office Synthesis Intro & Body Paragraph

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Post office Prompt 

Sample Papers 

Introduction 

• give background to the problem (changing world) 
• role of the post office in your opinion 
• Thesis - should the post office be restructured and if so, how?

    Possible Thesis: While we should remember _______________, it is important to __________(answer to question) and how / why ________ (solutions/ reasons)

Body Paragraph 1 

• Reason 1 
• Evidence to support (Doc A, B, C, etc) 
• Explanation of how / why your suggestion is important (Big ideas: value, unity, economic development) 
• Further evidence to support your point OR evidence that goes against your point (Docs) 
• Explain / Justify your rationale - what does the evidence give individuals / society / business? 
• Conclude - why is your solution essential? 

Sample Body Paragraph 

The world cannot ignore the demands of a changing world and with it our need to advance our communication. It is impossible to maintain the symbol of the post office unless, the USPS is restructured at a technological level. (Reason 1). O'Keefe informs us that 3.8 billion dollars are being lost with the down sizing of mail usage. (Source C) This is a reality that cannot be ignored if we want to preserve the postal system in any sense (Problem / Evidence). Essentially, the post office needs to walk into the modern age and use digital communication to enhance it's services and attract more customers. Perhaps it is time to look beyond email, but broadband service to which would, as Stone argues "define the Postal Service as a communications-delivery service, rather than just a team of letter carriers" (Source A). This is not a merely a replacement, but an expansion of the role of the post office. Source A reminds us that "most people are e-mailing" and we need to maintain the current trend of communication. We can celebrate our advancements by taking a selfie with our local post master! On the other hand, Kevin Cullen gently reminds the public that we do not want to replace the tradition of the letter and the paper (source F), but it is possible to hold onto these relics while reinventing ourselves (businesses) for the modern world. In fact, it is essential. If we want to preserve the historical integrity of the mail system in any fashion, then embracing the current communication trend of the modern world is essential to preserving a respectful and legitimate business in today's world. Yes the postal system is history, but it will be gone if it does not embrace technological developments.